Amidst all
the vegetables and broth, one solitary chunk of potato settled in the midst of
the chaos of its hodge-podge surroundings. “Trouble maker,” chided the other
ingredients in the pot. “How dare you position yourself like that!”
The lonely
potato knew it had done nothing wrong. The master had been stirring the pot
periodically for hours. Each time, he scooped up the little potato chunk and
tested it for tenderness. Each time, he gently placed it back in the center of
the pot, smiling at how tough this little piece of potato truly was.
Even
before this particular potato was prepped and simmered in the pot with all the
other vegetables, the master understood its viability. The hidden depths of
this potato were certainly immeasurable and unable to be quantified. There was
something spectacular about the essence of this potato, something that
challenged the other ingredients in the pot – making them want to put this one
in its place and shatter its relevance and importance among the others.
Now it’s
your turn, good people…
Again I
use symbolism to describe a scene that is all too common among people. This
time, however, I drew on specific details and to illustrate my message using
imagery. I want to tap into the emotions of my readers with this piece,
touching on something we’ve probably all experienced at some point in our
lives. And so I ask you…
What is
your first reaction to this piece? What feelings does it awaken in your heart
and mind?
Are you
inclined to want to do something about your emotions, or are you more likely to
control the way they make you feel? (Fight or flight response...)
If you
were writing a conclusion to this story, what would it be? How would it reflect
your feelings about the story being told?
Please
share your responses in the comments. If you read a response from other
visitors that causes you to pause and think about things, engage in the conversation
with them. Let’s use this particular investigation as a community forum, where
we can politely converse and learn from each other. I’m looking forward to
reading what you have to say. Thank you for your participation in Writing
Investigation #2.
Oh yes,
one more thing…
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Rights Reserved
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Credit: The Writers’ Post – Blog Hop #47
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I loved this post. It is so well written and brought forth lots of reminders for me of some not so nice times in my life - specifically at work. I wonder how many people read this and identify themselves as the victim. Do bullies really see themselves in a piece like this? Or are they beyond self-reflection?
ReplyDeleteBeing able to resolve internal conflicts through subtle means is so important. I don't know about the bullies. Good question. Thanks for stopping by and joining the conversation here:)
DeleteI loved your imagery and everything about this post. Well done!
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Ah, thanks, Kathy:) I'm so glad you stopped by for a visit!
DeleteThe imagery reminded me of someone who is always the center of attention and those who just want nothing more than to see that person go away. Perhaps it is a bully or a politician or some movie star. Whoever they are they are one TOUGH potato and they aren't leaving anytime soon--making the masses envious of the spotlight being pointed toward that one person.
ReplyDeleteOkay-curious--how far am I off base? LOL!! I have to admit these are fun!! I love what you did with this week's challenge!!
Cheers, Jenn.
You are as close as the imagery that speaks to you:) I like the idea of "one TOUGH potato." And as we all know, when those tough potatoes get cooked long enough, they turn to mush in a hurry...sometimes completely disintegrating. It's always a pleasure when you stop by for a visit:)
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